Mood Boards: X
Example of other text/style models: Done
Analysis of magazine covers: Done
Title: Done
Pitch feedback: X
Shots of work on magazine cover including photoshoot: Done
complete mock version of cover/contents page/ double page spread & article: Done
Commment
Good use of text on cover. Cover abit too 'blocky' - also colour is abit bland for Ear Candy as a title. Photo is good
Masthead needs explaining in terms of placement - link to examples from existing magazines.
Contents page shows promise- would be good to see a few examples- so you choose the best layout.
DP Spread is poor - (i know its a rough version)- real attention must be paid to layout - placement of text and pictures. A good effort though
Quite a few parts have images and no text - needs amending
Research/Planning: Level 4
Practical Draft: Level 3
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